LMFAO
Not to be offensive or anything, but that movie was one of the most emo flashes I've ever seen. Seriously, I was chuckling at it throughout because I kept expecting a joke to be coming. Unfortunately, one never came. Still, thanks for the laugh.
Graphics- The South Park style graphics were the highlight. They didn't fit the emo tone of the flash at all, but they were reasonably well done. I didn't like the lack of effort in the animation though. It was mostly tweens, and when they turned their head, the head would blink from one position to another. That looked horrible.
Style- I like South Park and I think you did a reasonably good job imitating it's graphical style, but I'll use the style category to review the plot. It was downright awful. Here is a basic summary of the flash: "Today is just like every other day, nobody notices me, my life sucks, look at my emo hairstyle, oh look a hot babe, I wish I could fuck her, but that's impossible, my life sucks, now I'm getting beat up for no reason, now I'm gonna die, oh look it's the hot babe, but it's not really a happy ending at all because of a line of text at the end." Seriously, doesn't that sound completely whiny and emo to you? You need to put some more thought into the plot of your next flash. This was totally cliche and boring.
Sound- the Armageddon music was pretty lame. That movie was awful. I think you should've used some Hawthorne Heights music or some other emo shit like that, it would've fit the flash better.
Violence- the part where he got beat up was pretty pathetic. They looked like they were hardly punching him.
Interactivity- a play button.
Humor- I found humor in the flash being so serious. It was funny that there was this happy ending at first, but then it ended with a quote saying that it wasn't actually a happy ending at all. For your next flash project I would suggest adding humor at least putting some more thought into it.
Is the guy in this flash supposed to be you in real life? If so, wow... you go ahead and keep feelin sorry for yourself buddy.
I apologize if this review seemed a little harsh, but emo movies like this really piss me off.