Great flash, poor satire
This was some top notch flash animation, as I'm sure you already know. The graphics are very well done, and the flash was a pleasure to watch. This alone will probably make this flash or at least this series very popular, and you will probably be earning some front page honors pretty soon.
My problem with the flash was that it ended up being less of a 1950s satire and more of a 1990s sitcom satire. I mean I recognized every single cliche you used in the movie as being from some sitcom in the 90s, not in the 50s. The Home Improvement neighbor, for instance. And I know I've seen that turkey trick somewhere before. The humor could have been great in this flash (for instance, SHOWING the spousal abuse would have been comic gold!), but all of the jokes ended up being corny, and even if it was on purspose, it made for an unfunny flash. The only part I was amused by was the reference to "Misery."
I also had some problems with the sound. The voice acting was incredible, but everything else was very below average. There was no constant music and the audience laughter was inconsitent. You also used some Simpsons music, which seemed rather inappropriate.
Overall, I'd like to compliment you on your animating style, but I'd like to see you work on getting a better, funnier story for your next flash.