Don't mean to be insensitive
This flash wasn't awful, but also wasn't great. You avoided any real animation by panning her across the screen over and over. To be honest, it turned out kind of comical, how the cuts kept appearing more and more until they were all over her. I know this probably really pisses you off, but I laughed at this flash. Part of the reason it was funny was that the drawing style was very... happy. A lot of times she wouldn't have a look of despair but a comical look of surprise. A look that says "there were two cuts on my arms, now there is THREE!!" Work on that next time...
Consider a more serious style if you want to make a serious flash.